Can't wait...
I can't wait until the zombie tank man is finally revealed.
Nice work.
Can't wait...
I can't wait until the zombie tank man is finally revealed.
Nice work.
So good
You showed some real talent for blasting overworked jokes and the rut of a mentality that most flash makers (myself included) often find themselves in...really, quite good.
Top-Notch
This was top-notch work and very enjoyable to watch. The amount of control used in the artwork, scene staging, and animation very obviously set the crudeness of the drawing and color scheme apart as intentional choices that lend to the overall meaning.
I was impressed overall with the fluidity of the animation, perspectives employed in the staging, and especially with the overall point of the piece (something on NG with a deeper meaning than just sex and violence...whoa!).
Truly a work of art.
Thank you VERY, VERY much for the attention paid to how I created the movie- it was always my main concern that I wanted the movie to look good and flow, else interest is lost in the surroundings and character and I get bad reviews. I too agree that it is such a rare thing to not have movies on newgrounds purely running on sex or violence (most noteably ones which suit no other purpose). Other movies I am not all too fond of are obviously bad submissions put on and immediately removed, and submissions with hardly a scratch of originality (usually sprite movies here). thanks for the review!
Once again...
Off the charts compared to almost all other NG stuff. Your stuff is professional quality. Anxious to see more.
Just awesome
You my friend have some serious talent. Top notch in all areas.
Probably over most NGers heads
This probably flew right by most of the people who visit newgrounds, but I actually played the original mario-hacked version of commander keen, and I know a little about the Doom creators' history, so this was pretty darn funny. I'll have to check out the book this is based on. Nice job, but your artwork and animation have a lot of room for improvement.
Mormons rock
Good to see another Mormon artist submitting on NG.
Good art
I liked the artwork, shows a lot of potential. The animation was a bit choppy for me, seemed a little jerky at times.
The storyline looks a lot like chronicles of narnia or peter pan, but hey, maybe you can pull it off well.
Sound needs improvement for sure.
Tighter shots
I'd reccomend some tighter shots on the character mixed in with you mostly wide and panoramic shots. Just MO though.
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