Score: 6

"Fun, but..."

submission: Clownoids

date: March 6, 2006

Not as good as your other submission today. I'm anxious to see more of your stuff.

Score: 8

"Very nice"

submission: Bat Ws Ball

date: March 6, 2006

Good spin on an old classic. Good coding and graphics. Elegant simplicity. Kudos.

Score: 6

"Mormons rock"

submission: A Jaredite Adventure

date: March 3, 2006

Good to see another Mormon artist submitting on NG.

Score: 9

"Way under-rated"

submission: Draw Your Own Cartoon!

date: March 1, 2006

This was an awesome and original idea and well executed. You should have a much higher score IMO!

Score: 7

"Good art"

submission: Soul-Driven: B1, Chp. 00

date: February 17, 2006

I liked the artwork, shows a lot of potential. The animation was a bit choppy for me, seemed a little jerky at times.

The storyline looks a lot like chronicles of narnia or peter pan, but hey, maybe you can pull it off well.

Sound needs improvement for sure.

Score: 6

"Tighter shots"

submission: Toily's Show

date: February 16, 2006

I'd reccomend some tighter shots on the character mixed in with you mostly wide and panoramic shots. Just MO though.

Score: 8

"Great graphics"

submission: Red Meat

date: February 8, 2006

Very well drawn and animated. I'd prefer thicker lines, but that's just me. Nice one.

Score: 4

"Not terrible"

submission: Toasty Turtle Dress Ups

date: February 8, 2006

Not bad, I liked the animated clothing options. Good graphics. I'd reccomend putting in a on ReleaseOutside {StopDrag()} in there though cuz the stuff got stuck to my mouse.

Score: 8

"Very impressive"

submission: Sleepless Knight

date: February 8, 2006

The coding on this game is really good, no bugs that I noticed, and no noticeable lag (I know cuz I'm working on a platform game right now). I loved the upgrade system, especially how her weapons and outfit actually change as she improves.

My only beefs are that she takes up a lot of the screen, so I got disoriented falling and jumping cuz I couldn't see far enough around me. (I'd also like to see a parallaxing 2nd BG in front of the static bg so I know when I'm moving on a large platform). The BGs overall could have had more effort...ie: more texture, shading etc.

Overall...top notch work.

Score: 3

"Too slow moving"

submission: Duel of the fakes

date: January 29, 2006

Everything moved waaay too slow. Increase the speed by about 5 times. It also needs some sound effects other than just theme songs from other stuff.

Some of the cinematics, character design, and art were pretty good though. I think if you worked on your timing, you could turn out some pretty good stuff.